"To Do" list

• Well, according to my classmates my letter-essay sounds more like an essay, so Rashad recommended me to loosen up a little bit. Also, they told me that i should give my personal opinion. So, based on this, for my revision, I will try to make sound more like a letter, and I will of course include my personal information.
• What I find more challenging in this assignment is to combine the information that I have with my opinion since that was part of my weakness for this assignment.
• Something that I will like to be better with this writing is actually keep doing as I have been doing so far because my classmates feedback were mostly positives.